A community to celebrate published and OC works of poetry.
Welcome to !poetry
Guidelines & Community Rules
In addition to the general rules of lemmy.world:
Published Poetry
1a: Poetry posts should include the title and the author, when the author is known.
O.C. Poetry
2a: Sharing original poetry is encouraged, but it must be preceded by the tag "[OC]."
2b: If an [OC] post is requesting feedback, it should also follow with the "[FB]" tag. It would look like the following example:
[OC] [FB] Nothing Gold Can Stay
Feedback
All feedback should be given in good faith.
3a: All [FB] requests should be met with comments constructive in nature. It is okay to dislike parts of a poem, but make sure to explain why you feel that way.
3b: Feedback does not need to be extraordinary in nature. Simply expressing how a work makes you feel is often enough.
3c: Use the honor system. When you receive good feedback, return it in kind
It must be the highest thrill.
There is an infinity of sadness before you and behind you.
The cruelty and wickedness of people can be endless.
Unfathomable depths, pressure beyond pressure.
But in the face of that you dare to unmask yourself.
the fear, the anxiety, the crushing weight. The audacity!
All lifted for a moment.
Audacious.
You. Finally.
Audacious.
There will be consequences.
But it was worth it.
…but there will be consequences.
And for the consequences, there with be consequences.
You are better now than you ever were.
Someone else linked this absolutely haunting reading of Kipling's 1915 war poem some month or so back elsewhere on Lemmy and it's stayed with me since then. The poem is great in its own right but this reading is something else.